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We wrote some stories about sea creatures. Some children pretended to be a creature.Some are here for you to enjoy. media type="file" key="VOICE035.MP3" Jemma's story Try this link to help your poetry writing.

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We read the story by Margaret Mahy DOWN THE BACK OF MY CHAIR and then wrote our own. These are some of them.
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Use this link to have fun writing a story. [|Story writing help] media type="custom" key="9576766"

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We are looking at the debate about Auckland Zoo bringing in two new elephants. We will be writing our opinion once we have looked at different points of view. [|Auckland Zoo Bruma the Elephant link] Watch out for our artwork too!

Try this page to see if you know the correct word. [|Word quiz]

We have been learning about writing descriptions Mrs Porritt brought some corn on the cob into the classroom to help us with our writing. These are some of our descriptions. . Unpeeled corn on the cob has green rough skin. It has a fluffly end like a bunny's tail. By Jonty

When I look at a piece of corn, it is green on the outside with ibrown fluff at one end. They are about 25cm long. By Renee

On the outside of corn there are hard leaves. It has fluffly silks. It is 26cm long. The leaves protect it. By Connor

Unpeeled corn is green on the outside. There was leaves dangling down. The leaves protect it. One one end of the corn there is a thing called silks. The skin of the corn is rough and bumpy. There are lines on the leaves. The corn is about 20cm long. On some of the corn the leaves are dying. At the other end, where the corn was attached it is quite hard and white. By Alice

Use this site to help your writing. Try this cool site it helps you write a story by giving you the pictures and heaps more. [|A story writing site] And a poetry site [|help with writing poetry]